His Sacred Vow

(My first attempt at a Triolet!Ā  Thanks Cubby for the Challenge!)

His Sacred Vow

10-16-13

His life and death His sacred vow

His love washes over my soul

His blood covers now to allow

His life and death His sacred vow

His life teaches us daily how

His death keeps us from evil sheol

His life and death His sacred vow

His love washes over my soul

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8 thoughts on “His Sacred Vow

  1. You did a fantastic job of the triolet! I love the way the lines flow so beautifully from one line to the next, especially from the third to the fourth, and fifth to the sixth lines. Made my eyes pop in delight. Love it. šŸ™‚

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  3. Nicely done – you made this look a lot easier than I found it! I never heard the word ‘Sheol’ before either so I learnt something new here šŸ™‚

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