Daily Prompt: Me Time ~~ on an Angel’s sigh

 

Daily Prompt: Me Time

On an Angel’s Sigh

12-15-12

mass of moving gleams

lamenting of a whimpering mist

layered across emptiness

relentless in pursuit of touch

you sing around a whispering corner

your biting caress moves away

drawn by fate

not a return trip just a hill

flowing up on an angel’s sigh,

swirling around its skirt

a wall of shifting walls

a thickness only one sliver deep

reigning in a stinging bitterness

chafing yet fleeing before caught

altering wonder

a feverish life ended

sparking a flame of thirst

not in vain little one

you’re a mantle of esprit chill

shivering briefly until moon rise

shining in the face of death

a fall of created light

a glare of silent white

~~~~~~~~~~~~

(just me time watching snowflakes)  ♥

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3 thoughts on “Daily Prompt: Me Time ~~ on an Angel’s sigh

  1. Wow!!! All that for snow?
    I really like it. You made it come alive.
    At first read, I understood about 70% of the whole. Some really tight lines there.
    E.g. lamenting of a whimpering mist
    layered across emptiness
    relentless in pursuit of touch
    you sing around a whispering
    corner
    your biting caress moves away
    drawn by fate
    not a return trip just a hill
    flowing up on an angel’s sigh,
    swirling around its skirt
    a wall of shifting walls
    a thickness only one sliver deep
    reigning in a stinging bitterness
    chafing yet fleeing before
    caught”
    Wow!!!!! Shardssssssss!!!!!!!!!!
    Your broken shards and sharp. And they fly!

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